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| | Name : | Scott Hunsaker | Organization : | Hart Intercivic | Post Date : | 9/30/2005 |
| Section : | 6.7 | Page no. : | 25 | Line no.: | | Comment : | Comment:
The third paragraph in the
opening introduction states that
"the wireless communications
path on which the signal travels
is via the air".
Recommended change:
This should be reworded
because it is inaccurate; the
communications signal travels
via electromagnetic field.
Rationale:
Inaccurate statements cause
the document to lose credibility
with the reader. | |
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