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| | Name : | Mary Kiffmeyer | Organization : | Minnesota Secretary of State | Post Date : | 9/30/2005 |
| Section : | 2.2.1 | Page no. : | | Line no.: | | Comment : | C. "AND/OR"
Language and its consistent use is a point that has already been
presented in my comments. In regards to security, I strongly urge that
unambiguous language and terminology be used, and that consistency be
maintained. As one example:
Volume I, Section 2.2.1(a) [Page 2-2]
§ "Provide security access controls that limit and detect access
to critical system components to guard against loss of system integrity,
availability, and accountability."
The original sentence contained a simple "or". In order to give
strength to the statement, and to allow stronger standards for
jurisdictions, the word "and" should replace "or". | |
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